VectorMancer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[Darwin Potential]

Very hard

to find something to critique, the girls upper and lower body seem somehow to not match properly. Maybe the posture is a little bit too twisty for her spine? I love the flowing hair and the expression on her face though!

I'm sure If she just puts back the necklace and closes the lid, the monster will leave her alone.. :-O

[mechano girl]

I like her face

Her (tough) facial expression is really good, what is she thinking? I don't know, it makes me think.

[Your Best Friend is]

Good

It's very clear and has nice colors, creating an instant atmosphere. It would be a nice scene for a game: 'You enter the bar..'

[Alien]

Awesome * 100

I like it that you used the original Alien 1 / Giger design. Very authentic!

[castle crashers red knight [s]]

Exellent

Just like the completed picture. I believe with this kind of picture, the 'message' is in the pose. You could have added 4 tons of armour, a sword as large as himself and a score of dead corpses around him. But you created the same imposing effect just with his stance.
At least this is what I'm concentrating on in my own art (2 pieces to go and I'll be able to post them on NG!). I'm currently trying to draw semi-realistic characters from the Japanese Endo era. I spent most of the drawing time on developing the pose, the rest seems just filling in the details. :-)

dommi-fresh responds:

i will check those out man

[THE Red Knight]

Very, very good

The robe is amazingly done! You show that a knight can look really cool without tons of armour. The pose is very well done as well, no need for this knight to raise his weapons, he looks threatening just standing there.

One slight criticism if I may: the sword looks to short or the perspective of it didn't work. I see a very long handle for 2 hands with a heavy pommel, stil the blade looks too short to balance out. Come to think of it, you could make it a single handed sword to go with the shield, with a longer blade to create an even more realistic picture?

Did I mention already that the robe is awesome? :-)

dommi-fresh responds:

yes you did ha ha
thanks for the critique i agree about the sword it is way to short but if you watch monty pythons holy at the bit with the black knight you will notice the sword that i was trying to copy

[Viking Girl]

Nice!

Love the cute face almost hidden in all the fur and armour.