VectorMancer's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[M34 Auto-sniper]

The whole thing looks good, but

The 'thing' which could be a bipod is too unrealistic to uphold my suspension of disbelief for this fantasy weapon. :-)

All in all: pretty good!

Dawn-Breaker responds:

I had no idea what you were talking about.. but thanks!

[Random city]

Nice

I like the light/shadow and surreal emptyness of the city.

DarkSword responds:

Thanks! emptyness wasn`t really on purpose but anyway, I kind of do empty stuff most of the time.. = p

[Samurai girl]

To compensate for GenericJoshes craptastic comment

Nice pose, for me it looks liks she's drawing the weapon alright, in front of her, to show it off to the enemy. Nice colours, nice drawing of the sword.

Not so good: shoes are too pronounced? Big? blocky? Not happy about them. Some trees (left) kinda suck.

DannyP responds:

Yeah, it seems only the fir trees look decent. I've improved on drawing generic trees by now, though. I realize this response is kinda late, what with it being December 27, 2012 - nearly 2 years since I posted this drawing. The sandals look a bit crappy, too, yeah.

[Cloudmill]

For some reason this is genius

You really nailed it with the simple forms and well chosen colours.

TreasurePlanet responds:

hahaha
thanks dude ^^
means a lot
I left a review for you here:

http://www.newgrounds.com/art/view/vectormancer/alien-landscape

[RED BARON!]

Wow

A major improvement on the previous one. The colors and details are very well balanced!

beastkid7 responds:

Thanx dewd! Yeah, Ya never see the difference in your abilities until you get contrastingly better. I've been practicing allot lately.

[Commission : Soldier]

I kinda like the sharp outline

Got a criticism though: he doesn't know how to hold a gun. His r thumb is on the front instead of the back of the grip. It could pass for a 'relaxed' holding of the gun, but then he wouldn't have his finger on the trigger.

His left hand is positioned too much to the front. If he would raise the gun to shoot, he would have to reposition the hand or be left holding it in a very awkward position.

TyraWM responds:

Thank you I'll fix that :)

[I LOVE MINIGUNS!]

It isn't the chain gun

The character looks awesome, especially the leg armor.

CHAOSWONTON responds:

Thank you. I did put a lot of work on his legs.

[Pole Axe]

Getting better

Nice going with the weapons, but I think you can do better! Let's see some characters wielding the weapons! :-)

DeadlyPanther responds:

I've been trying, but character's are very much more detailed than weapons aren't they. I thought about trying to draw up armor sets just to get used to the human shape and positions :)

[Medieval Time]

The horse is nice

But did someone shoot a spoon in its head?

kashidoodles responds:

XD It's an inside joke. It's a Unispoon.

[Sag II]

Very hard to draw nice looking alien guns

Usually they look 'abstract'. This one is really good. I don't like the name 'Sagitaurus' though..

Z0nne responds:

Well its the first name that came to my mind since the Acronym for it was SAG-52 when i made it :)